So yeah i realized that i kinda spaced on the whole villian part of the plot. He's not really doing any of the things that make him so important to the story, so i need to figure out how to get that into the mix.
I did however decide to cut back on the Hero's "powers", and am still working out why he's immortal, since if it's just based on his supernatural charcteristic there'd be a bunch more of them (immortals) running around then i feel there should be.
That's about it for this series.
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